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The Smiling Rabbit Open in new Window. [E]
Keep calm and carrot on!
by Genipher Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings from the House of Mormont!
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Oh my, this was adorable! Traveling space rabbits with a cliffhanger ending! How did this not win the day’s contest? Nuff said…

I loved every bit of it: the captain, the ensign, the way their characters meshed, the descriptions, the rollicking tale of disaster and adventure across the galaxies to a place that looks suspiciously like the Third Rock From the Sun… it would make a cute opening chapter for a children’s book series. I wonder how many people ever get really good ideas from the Writers Cramp and go on to make larger works out of them.

Your formatting leaves nothing wanting: large clear font, a tidy drop note (with a cute title, I might add) and three relevant genres. There are contests that will take previously written stories under 2000 words; I keep forgetting to submit my own hodgepodge to them, what with all the other activities around here. Let me fetch the link… "SENIOR CENTER FORUM" Open in new Window., a spot that I should visit each month with whatever story didn’t place in the previous month’s official contest *Laugh* Thanks for reminding me.

I really enjoyed reading this, thanks for sharing and have fun writing *HeartG*

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