Hi Nixe! I was searching for Paranormal stories, when yours caught my attention. I was attracted to it because I loved the little image in the brief introduction - If I remember correctly, it's of Easter Island. After reading your story, I had an, ah, moment. It was the perfect big, mysterious rock to add to this mythical story about rocks and crystals! I was also intrigued by your thoughts about how every rock and every crystal tells a story! I always think that, too, and I love to keep smooth rocks especially. I felt that you presented this story well. You listed a notation about the prompt nicely in a dropnote. You would be surprised to learn how many people don't know how to do that, but these little details give a finished and more professional look, in my opinion, to items on WDC. I chuckled at that quote about collecting books because unread libraries are so important. It's on my, 'things to do', list to finally rid my shelves of old, unread books. I really could use the space, but then I read your quote, and I'm second guessing that idea. You provoked thought with your item! That quote gave you the idea to write about collecting rocks and crystals. I can really see the connection, and I was very impressed to find out that you have over a hundred of each!! Wow!! I have some, of course, but I'm embarrassed to say how few I have after reading how many you have. Your words expressed a feeling of comfort when visiting this collection. I can certainly understand that. I was fascinated by that unusual story you told about finding your finding your first crystal in a vacation shop. It's like that unique crystal and your paths crossed for a reason, I think. Yes, you closed the tale well. It was indeed, the beginning of an enchantment. The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. -Write on!
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