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*Exclaim* Hi Nixe! I was searching for Paranormal stories, when yours caught my attention. I was attracted to it because I loved the little image in the brief introduction - If I remember correctly, it's of Easter Island. After reading your story, I had an, ah, moment. It was the perfect big, mysterious rock to add to this mythical story about rocks and crystals! I was also intrigued by your thoughts about how every rock and every crystal tells a story! I always think that, too, and I love to keep smooth rocks especially.

I felt that you presented this story well. You listed a notation about the prompt nicely in a dropnote. You would be surprised to learn how many people don't know how to do that, but these little details give a finished and more professional look, in my opinion, to items on WDC.

I chuckled at that quote about collecting books because unread libraries are so important. It's on my, 'things to do', list to finally rid my shelves of old, unread books. I really could use the space, but then I read your quote, and I'm second guessing that idea.
You provoked thought with your item!

That quote gave you the idea to write about collecting rocks and crystals. I can really see the connection, and I was very impressed to find out that you have over a hundred of each!! Wow!! I have some, of course, but I'm embarrassed to say how few I have after reading how many you have.

Your words expressed a feeling of comfort when visiting this collection. I can certainly understand that.

I was fascinated by that unusual story you told about finding your finding your first crystal in a vacation shop. It's like that unique crystal and your paths crossed for a reason, I think.

Yes, you closed the tale well. It was indeed, the beginning of an enchantment. *Smile*


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