Greetings, alicat3955 ! I am reviewing this because I discovered it in Read & Review. I'd also like to say, "Welcome to WdC!" First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. What I Liked The title, My Grandma Rosie Heard E. Roosevelt Pee. definitely drew my attention to this piece. No way could I pass it by without reading it. This is so funny! Quite a legendary tale, as you refer to it, for your Great Grandma Rosing to pass on through the years! I love it. I think my favorite lines are: I have no idea if the speech was any good or not or what it was about, that was never part of the legendary tale. and But then again how many people can say that they heard a First Lady pee? Great presentation. Well-written. Suggestions/Comments to Consider I have nothing to suggest. It's perfect the way it is! Final Thoughts I'm so glad you shared this little piece of history! I really enjoyed reading it, as it put a smile on my face this morning. Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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