I really enjoyed the fact that the dreams referenced at the beginning of the story came back and turned out to be prophetic in the end; it was a great way to add a full-circle element and feeling of finality to the story. Structurally, to be able to do that in only a few hundred words is really impressive. Well done!

Toward the end of the story, the description was a little confusing. Suzanna leaves the house before sunrise (as usual), but then it becomes foggy in the dark. Suzanna turns on her high beams (a bad idea in dense fog, I can attest to!) and she drives until the fog abates, but then the sky is "unusually black" while the temperature is also "growing warm" to the point where sweat was dripping down her face. Later, the heat intensifies alongside the darkness, which makes in unclear what's supposed to be happening with the environment. Is it a supernatural darkness or a supernatural heat? Or both?

Overall, despite the somewhat confusing description toward the end of the story before the twist at the end is revealed, I thought this was an entertaining tale that kept the reader's interest throughout and really delivered on its premise. Nice job!