"Game of Thrones"  "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 



Hi Jody,

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Raising Rabbits

First Impression: I had to read this line a second time-- How was the rabbit raising conference... on the second read I understood you meant an actual conference. It reminded me of every time I visited an animal shelter I would come home with a new cat. I just couldn't leave them there. Like your character my husband told me that I couldn't visit the shelter anymore.

What needs your attention: I didn't see any punctuation or grammar issues. Kudos.

What part I liked best: I could connect with the story because of our common interest in animals. Rabbits do multiply quickly, I know that from first hand knowledge too. My kids wanted bunnies one year for Easter. Within a couple of months we had six bunnies and then shortly after that another batch. I learned that boy and girl bunnies can't live together unless I'm seeking overpopulation.

Overall impression: Chinchillas are adorable.
This was a cute story about three bunnies rescued form an elderly woman who could no longer care for them.

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What does the Fox say????? Happy to hear you're joining the games.


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