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Hi James A. Osteen Jr.

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Thinking Spring

First Impression: The title caught my attention and like the title I'm also thinking about spring. It was beautiful for a while here in Vegas but then the temperatures dropped and it felt like winter again. But then I was reminded of all the weather the Northeast has been experiencing. I'm sure they can't wait until the flowers and trees bloom.

What needs your attention: It's a free style poem with four stanzas that gives the reader the feeling of moving forward with spring. I wouldn't change a thing.

What part I liked best: I live in the desert and April showers don't bring flowers. Spring comes earlier here as do the rain showers. My favorite part of spring are the hummingbirds. The author reminds the reader that all things are worth waiting for its arrival.

Overall impression: This poem as written gives the feeling of spring as it evolves from the bud forming, opening and blessing us with gorgeous displays. The author clearly enjoys poetry.

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