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A Review From The Iron Bank Of Braavos.

Hi Cathrin Stuart. I am Megan, one of the sly foxes.

First Impression: I see that this about a druid and ancient lore. It looked dark and mysterious so I had to get into this and read more. Life's balance was mentioned. Nature's wisdom. This poem drew me in and I was hooked. I am here with my observations.

What needs your attention: The word ase. I wasn't sure this a type error refers to something else you wanted to say. I have no suggestions for improvement.

What part I liked best: A Druid walks, the wisdom he seeks. Secrets of healing, they have borne. He reads the stars, the moon's soft glow. The ancient lore he keeps alive. Under the druid's care, life's balance is beyond compare. I like druids and their knowledge and wisdom. I feel like I was with the druid and part of his plan and knowledge.

Overall Impression: A Neat rhyme balance balances this out with a good flair. Easy to follow and you don't get bored. Some good reflections. Creative and colorful. A nice style. I was in tune with every word. A good presentation and the last line, In wisdom of the druid, we confide. I like this. Great job of writing.



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