Title of Poem: This poem has no title
Name of Author: Louis Williams

Hello Louis,

I am Kristina, and I am here to give you a "Game of Thrones"  review, and I hope this feedback will be useful to you.
I found your poem through another WDC member, and I am grateful I had the opportunity to read it

Overall Impression: I enjoyed this poem very much. I found it flow smoothly and easy to read. I felt its message to be true whether fiction or non-fiction.

Message/Theme: The message expresses the thought though the intentions are honorable, they are not always received well. The author expresses his feelings through an astronaut fighting to survive in an alisn world.

Narrative/Style: The narrative is a small poem that shows the anger, frustration and fear of a man alone in an strange environment.
The style is emotional and personal.

Form/Flow: The form is a 5 4-line stanza, Free Verse poem with a last line of 2 words for emphasis.
The Flow follows the authors thoughts.

Mood/Tone: The mood is fearful, sad and thought provoking.
The Tone is anger, frustration and fear.

Imagery/ Pace:The imagery is effective for the descriptions.
The pace is smooth and filled with thoughts.

Thank you for sharing your poem,
Write On!
Kristina

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You responded to this review 04/06/2024 @ 2:33pm EDT

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