Hello! I found your poem at random. I'm with the "The WDC Angel Army"  I enjoyed reading it and I hope you find this feedback useful.





My impression of this piece:
When I was reading you poem, it brought so much emotion because the author would spend time with the tigers. That's really neat and you kept going back to seeing them, until the one passed. Being attached to an animal will always be close to your heart especially if you work in a rescue. It's good that you wrote a poem about the tigers, and you can let people know how you feel about them. I'm sure you got close to the female tiger. You did a good job on the poem and I read it all the way through. It made me realize, we have to be careful with these animals because they can hurt you.



Grammar and Spelling:
I didn't see any errors in spelling or vocabulary.


What I really liked:
This was the part I like because it had the emotion into it. When I read this poem, I almost had tears because the one tiger passed. Then you slowly opened up your heart for the male tiger. I think tigers are beautiful animals but they are protective over their young.

In the many months that followed,
The grief my heart nearly swallowed.
Then all the good you found in me,
Finally found its way free.
Free to open my heart again,
To be open where and when.
When yet another so great,
Would in my heart love create.


Suggestions:
There are only 2 things, you need to make the font a little bigger and center it, so you can see how it is written, when you are done writing it.


Final Thoughts / Side Notes:
Well, I liked the poem and I'm for one to like wild animals especially tigers because they are like house cats but a lot larger. I honestly like the poem because you put so much emotion into it and I can feel it when I was reading it.


Thank you for sharing it,
Beacon




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