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Victim of Changes Open in new Window. [18+]
Entry for the Rebel Poetry contest November 2023 (Joint third)
by Dave Ryan Author Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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This is a painful poem to read, given the implications behind the words. Part of my wonders what happened on that fateful night, but it certainly doesn't look good. Likewise, seems that there was a child as a result, whose eyes remind the mother too much of the father. Makes one wonder what will happen next.

Thoughts
This is a somewhat painful, and spooky poem to read, once one knows what it's about.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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