Hello Scarypotato,

I am Kristina, and I am here to give you a "Game of Thrones"  review and rate it. I came across your story, The Lightthrough another member. I enjoyed reading it very much, and I hope you find this feedback useful.

Overall Impression: I liked this story very much. It captured my attention from the very beginning and held it to the very end. You did a good job building the tension at a good pace. It leaves the reader anxious to find out who these aliens are and what is going to happen to the earthling.

Your word choices and figurative language choices were very effective in your descriptions of your setting and the spaceship. It was easy to visualize this ship hovering as the earthling is lifted up on a dark, foggy night.

Your time, place and setting characteristics worked well and flowed together smoothly. Your characters are well-developed, but the dialogue was minimal, and flowed smoothly. I saw no issues with grammar, spelling, and/or punctuation.

I thought this story was well written.
What I liked best was...actually the whole story.

Kristina

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My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .