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 Wiarton Willie Is Whistling In The Wind  [E]
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by SandraLynn Team Florent!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Review of Wiarton Willie Is Whistling In The Wind by SandraLynn Team Florent!

Here's a bit of fun indeed. You tell the story very well and we soon begin to feel we know the characters, especially the poor mayor as the bogus sighting reports start coming in. These are the main comic aspects of the tale, of course, some of them being quite surreal. Was it the joker or Willie seated on the bous bound for Toronto, I wonder. Sometimes we make funnier jokes than we intended. *Wink*

You write very well, with a light touch and accurate phrasing that delivers things quickly and without fuss. It's all so delightfully simple and straightforward, everything laid out neatly, so we're guided through effortlessly and without deflection. The one thing you might do for improvement is to increase the font size a little. Old codgers like me sometimes have difficulty with the smaller sizes. Failing eyesight and all that, you know.

I was a bit surprised that Willie didn't turn up at the end. I'd been expecting it since most stories of this type go for the happy ending. But it's fine to leave it as a surprise. Just that now we're all wondering what really did happen to Willie.

A most enjoyable tale and a pleasant break from the toil of the day. Thank you!

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