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 | For Want of a Spring  [E] The trouble that can be caused by a missing spring  |
| (5.0)   This is a "Game of Thrones" review in association with the"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Hello Detective ,The views and opinions in this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not necessarily reflect the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. This is the third of three reviews from the package you won at "Mad Hatter's Tea Party " . First Impression:When I read the title, I was thinking of Spring the season, and was taken by surprise to find it was about actual springs! Despite the description line offering a hint that the author wasn't referring to the season; I didn't catch it. The reason I didn't 'get it' is because I live in S. Florida and the only Spring we have is on the calendar, lol. Thoughts:This is a fun, clever, and even slightly funny little poem you have given us here! Favorite Part(s):I rather liked all the examples you gave where springs come into play. Many of which we may not realize a spring is involved. Suggestions:Everything looks great; spelling and everything else. I really enjoyed this poem of yours! Keep writing! Thank you for sharing your work. Kindest Regards, Lilli, House Martell  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 04/10/2024 @ 1:10am EDT