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 Watering the Willow Tree Open in new Window. [13+]
Watering the crooked willow tree puzzled me.
by Vicki Lynne Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I love personal contemplative narratives like this: peacefully considering what helps you along in your journey and sharing that with us.

Since it’s a personal experience, I don’t have much to criticize about what you’ve chosen to say. I know in my own experience I need those quiet times where it seems as though I’m not doing anything, and your illustration of watering the crooked willow tree is a beautiful way of explaining our universal need to step back and rest and refresh ourselves before carrying on with our many challenging tasks.

I love the paragraph where you mention the power of music to affect our emotions. As an obsessive music lover, I know how it feels to tap into my deepest emotions and fears, finding a common ground with artists who share their hearts with us in various ways. It’s good to realize that so much of what we go through is actually a shared experience. We are not alone, either in our joys or our sorrows.

I would suggest using size 4 Verdana font to ensure readability across devices. You can also underline the title at the top of your item, and include a word count in the subtitle so that we know if we have time to read and review in one sitting.

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