Oh what fun! Bravo, Carol! Your fun/funny poem story about the Halloween experience put a smile on my face this rainy morning! It made it feel like Halloween in April!

I wanted to read something which was fun, and I wasn't disappointed by choosing your item. I had no idea when I started reading it, that it had stanza, after stanza after stanza of limericks! Wow, I can never get enough of good, humorous limericks, and you had an abundance of them here. I'll have to say that I was very impressed. I've written a few limericks in my life - though I wrote only one at a time! - So I know that they are really not easy to write. Not only does the strict pattern need to be followed, but it has to rhyme well, too.

All of the limericks in your story poem read smoothly. I tried to find something, anything which I could point out to you...A rhyme that was off, for example...But everything was perfect. You have a talent for storytelling and rhyming!

Poor Jack. He wanted more than anything to fit in to the Halloween pack, but wow, things had a way throughout the story of going wrong. He had someone carve a creepy face. He had someone vandalize him with a fire candle. Poor Jack the pumpkin couldn't catch a break!

I felt that your creativity shined, as I read about Ghosts and witches, too. Oh, and we must not forget the witch's hat and cat! All of these things gave me vivid imagery of Halloween.

I'd like to add that the little Halloween story you added under the poem about the Halloween Pack was a fun/funny touch! I enjoyed reading about the skeleton and other favorites there, too. The image at the top was perfect as well. Nice work.

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