It's a fantastic short story based on ancient Indian culture. But the messages are true forever.
It's a bit dramatic. But, the length and number of characters are minimal.
Once upon a time in India, A kingdom named Bharanipur. The ruler was King Ripudaman. He was intelligent and honest. But, Prince Vats was completely the opposite in behaviour.
There was a powerful sage named Bhadra who lived with his wife and daughter in this Kingdom. In the festival of spring, Rishibala and Prince met each other. They fell in love at first sight. But, he left Rishibala alone.
After consultation with the wife, Bhadra decided to meet the Prince. The Prince denied knowing Rishibala. Sage cursed him for losing his youth. He immediately lost his youth and became old. Prince several times requested to forgive the curse. Sage also felt mercy but, there was no way to take back the curse. But there was a way of rescuing, it was time-consuming. But there was no way to accept it. What is that condition? If the Prince continuously adopted honesty for seven years, he would be relieved from the curse.
Even after seven years, he always maintained a disciplined life.
There are a few messages.
First, if you are a dishonest person, you have to pay heavily for your deeds.
Secondly, it gives an idea of ideal punishment. The punishment that can rectify a person, is the ideal punishment.
The pace of the short story is fast and appreciable. That gives an awesome readability.
It's truly an impressive performance.
Write on!


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