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 Flowers of the Field - 17 lines - 3-31 Open in new Window. [E]
A poem about flowers and their growing process
by Jtpete 1986 Author Icon
Review by Chrys O'Shea Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Name of Poem: Flowers of the Field
Name of Author: J. R. Pete

Hello, I came across your poem in Browse by Type under Poetry. I enjoyed reading it. I hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression: I loved this poem. I thought it was very well written. It made feel warm and happy. I also thought it to be very creative when writing the poem, the first letter in each line spelled the title of the poem downward.

Message/Theme: The message is that the cycle of life depends on the balance of nature: the soil nutrients, the rain, the sun, and the bees.

Narrative/Style: The narrative is a small poem that shows how the balance of nature provides the cycle of life for the children of the field—the flowers.

The style is warm and emotional.

Form/flow: The form is a 17-line free verse poem.

The flow follows the author's thoughts and is appreciative.

The mood reflects on the reader as warm and happy.

Imagery/Pace: The imagery was excellent. It is very important for the reader to visualize a field of flowers, all colors, and the bees and rain doing their part.

The pace is smooth, making it easy to follow and read the piece.

My Favorite Line:

Life and regrowth from season to season; from daylight to darkness; from past to present.

Kristina

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