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10 Days of Spring Open in new Window. [E]
Entries for the 10 Days of Spring Contest
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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GAMES OF THRONES BOOK REVIEW

This is a review for "10 Days of Spring" Open in new Window. from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones" Open in new Window.

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.

*Reading* THE BOOK

The book contains 7 entries and is fantasy themed.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the title. It caught my attention and made me curious about the book.

*Star* INTRODCUTION

The introduction is very plain and doesn't really set an idea in the reader's mind what to expect. I might suggest expanding the introduction by creating a 3-5 sentence blurb that teases what the plot is about. A more fleshed out blurb could also be used here. If so, I would use the first paragraph to explain the hero or heroine, the next paragraph to explain the conflict, and the last to set the rising action.

I would also using a graphic to set the tone or mood of the book.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. on the introduction or the chapter headings. If anything, I might suggest using a larger font in the entries as the current is hard to read on the eyes.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The book has a lot of potential but none of the entries have been developed since 2014. The entries are short which encourages the reader to pop in, read, and move on.

Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen

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