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Valentine's Day Cute Pup CNotes Open in new Window. [E]
Valentine's Day Cute Pup CNotes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Gem* Areas of Strength

You have quite the nice and endearing community shop here! The mix of Valentine's Day and cute puppies, what's there not to love? Each image evokes a smile and that warm feeling you get from receiving unconditional love—be it from a compassionate and reassuring lover or a four-legged friend wagging their tail for you when you open the door.

The images available are a masterwork! The images are clear and would certainly appeal to a wide-range of customers.

I think the bright colors are a nice happy pop that would help brighten someone's day.



*Gem* Areas for Improvement

The pastel color palette you've chosen for the images in this Valentine's Day-themed community shop may confuse some with this being an Easter-themed shop instead. If you were to remove the text from the images, I'd find it difficult attributing the image with the holiday. There are a lot of pinks, violets, and soft blues. I think most would attribute the color red with Valentine's Day. There's nothing inherently wrong with introducing or including other colors, of course. Perhaps it may help ground the shop in the holiday by including some imagery with more traditional colors associated with Valentine's Day alongside the images you've already made available. Just as a mean to reinforce the notion that this is a shop for Valentine's Day—for both the new and the old.

The other issue with the color scheme is that the color saturation and hues used in the main imagery muddy the overlying text. In a few images it becomes difficult to make out or clearly read the text because the colors are so similar to the richness of the colors they're laid atop. I'd suggest reworking those images so that the colors pop off of one another (blues atop of pinks, darker atop of lighter, etc.) rather than bleed into one another.

The last suggestion I'd have is to include some additional dog breed options to select from for the future. It'd allow customers to better relate and connect to an image if they're able to find a breed that they have or have fond memories of. It adds another layer of personality and individuality to the shopping and gifting experience.



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