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Hi Bubba. Happy WDC anniversary!

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Where's The Evidence?

First Impression: The author clearly knows the history of our government and all it's flaws. Sadly, there are more flaws than I realized.

What needs your attention: The content flowed smoothly but for this reader the small font size was challenging not all of us are 25 year olds with 20/20 vision. I also noted that the author chose not to use white space between paragraphs. This use of white space shows the author is giving the reader time to process the paragraph read before moving onto the next.

What part I liked best: I remember reading about the grandmother struggling to keep her home because of a situation she had not knowledge about. Her grandchildren committed the crime and should be held accountable but their names are not on the deed to that property.
It would be no different if for instance I offered my friend a place to stay until she got back on her feet but unbeknownst to me she sold drugs out of my home, I shouldn't lose my home for being a good Samaritan like the Grandma was.

Overall impression: I found the writing informative and presented in a manner the reader could easily follow though I did need to use my touch screen to make the font easier to read. Thank you for reminding me again how important it is to be actively involved in our political situations today.

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.


What does the Fox say?????


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .