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Toadette's Story  [18+]
As a new foot slave to Princess Peach, Toadette's life is taken for a hectic, erotic ride.
by VanillaSoftArt
         Review for entry/chapter: "Chapter 15 - Bus Bitches
Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Past Member 'ashok25'
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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This chapter does not contain the main story. It is a side story. Princess Daisy, Penelope and Toadette entered the bus from the castle bus stop. The journey began. A child, a boy, started to disturb them. His mother didn't try to stop him which she should.
Princess Daisy observed that and punished her mother for her inaction. From her, Princess cleaned the feet of the entire group.
The chapter teaches us some lessons.
First, a child may do something wrong unintentionally. The parent must correct the behaviour. Otherwise, that parent has to pay heavily.


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