Hi Beholden ;

I'm 💙 Carly- Hello 2025 . This was a great poem to read. I could picture the sour pinched up faces without the video, but the video was funny. That you for sharing both and making my day sweeter with a tinge of sourly facial gymnastics.

I love the guy popping his eye open.

Your rhymes were divine and the flow was heavenly. I want to try writing a poem for this. I don't usually read other people's stuff before my own attempt, but I could not resist this morning. I will make my own sour attempt after you wee poem settles down in my mind and lets me create one of my own.

Thanks again for sharing this. Have a great Easter Weekend and I do hope to read more of your poetry again soon.

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