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 Fingers of Betrayal - Part III Open in new Window. [18+]
Part 3 of story in progress for years. I may post part 4 soon too. Needs a lot of work.
by Skurpio Author Icon
Review by New Year's Sox Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Psychopath much. James sounds like a total stalker. Does he actually have a relationship with her or does he just think he does. So he's killed the husband and the roommate. Is he going to kill her if she does not respond the way he thinks she should? There is a child in this mess too? Totally not good. The woman is in desperate need of help and she does not even know it yet. This is scary. Definitely a psychological thriller. Stalkers are very scary especially if the victim is not aware of the extent their obsession.
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