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 Apprentice Open in new Window. [E]
Write a 300-word story with the line: I didn't do anything.
by Just Jae Author Icon
Review of Apprentice  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Just Jae Author Icon

I came across your story perusing entries for the Daily Flash Fiction Challenge.

I thought this was a lovely little flash fiction story and an imaginative response to the prompt *Smile*

I felt like I could picture the scene in this fantasy story and your characters are intriguing, with good communication between them.

I think you told a fun story in just 300 words which still has a beginning/middle/and end which captured my attention.

And I love the name "Laora Nightwind" ! *Smile*

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