Hello, Carly!

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! This mindful poem of yours was in the post before mine in "I Write in 2024," so I'm here to do your review. I hope you enjoy it and find it encouraging and uplifting.




INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I loved your mindful poem! Well done!

You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Great way to catch my attention, keep it and make me want to read more posts too. Well done!



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

My favorite line of your mindful poem was: "And slip into mindful breeze." It made me smile and want to slip into my own mindful breeze. Well done!

You made great use of rhyming and it contributed to the fun and relaxed feeling of your mindful poem. Well done!

You did a great job keeping your poem to eight lines for "Express it in Eight," and making those eight lines count. Well done!

I thought the ending was perfect. Motivational yet still within the mindfulness theme of your poem. Well done!

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your mindful poem. Well done!



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's nice as it is. Well done!





CONCLUSION:
You have a great writing style and sense of mindfulness and I enjoy reading your poetry. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your time, community spirit, mindful mindset, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler









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A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" 





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