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A Minos Mistake Open in new Window. [E]
You're only as good as your last failure - a 24 syllable poem - contest entry
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Review by JACE Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Ned Author Icon.

I'm Jace, and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "A Minos Mistake" Open in new Window. for the "~ The Poet's Place Cafe~" Open in new Window. group. *Smile*

*Puzzle4* Form. You wrote a 24-syllable poem for a contest. I'd not heard of such a format before. But then I cannot claim any great knowledge of poetry since I dabble in it sparingly. I counted; you are spot on with your syllables.

*Note1* Overall Impression. As for your poem itself--I loved it. Being a lover of mythology, especially Greek (not so much Roman), I enjoyed reading your well-crafted poem. So true, how fickle history can be toward an event.

*Exclaim* Technical or Editorial Considerations. I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your poem.

         *Bullet* I found no issues from this section. Well done.    

*Star* Rating.  5.0. 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinions.


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