Hello Aaron D. Fish !

Welcome to Writing.Com! This poem of yours was featured in my "read & review" section, and I enjoyed it and wanted to welcome you to our fun site, so I'm here to do your review. I hope you enjoy it and find it encouraging and uplifting.


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I loved your dark romance poem! Well done!

You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Well done!



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

I love that you joined Writing.Com on St. Patrick's Day. This poem doesn't qualify, but I invite you to write and enter in my Lucky Limerick Contest ("Lucky Limerick Contest" , as you are a talented poet and it's a fun contest (not that I'm biased or anything lol). However, I do think this poem does qualify for The Shadows and Light Contest (https://www.writing.com/main/forums/item_id/1935693-Shadows-and-Light-Poetry-Con...) though, and I encourage you to enter it there. It is a free verse poetry contest run by an awesome person here. It's free to enter and you can enter one poem per round. I think the rounds go from the 15th of the current month to the 14th of the next month. Definitely double check the rules and word counts, but I think your poem qualifies and would do well.


Free verse poetry can be tricky (at least for me ) and you did a great job with the form for this poem. I think the form matched well with the message of the poem. Well done!


I loved your use fire and related symbolism throughout this hot-burning poem of yours. Well done!


I loved the phrase "Laughter of beauty." I hadn't heard that before. Well done!


I didn't notice any spelling mistakes in your poem. Well done!


Your poem was interesting to me, and it felt like it was coming straight from your heart and soul. Well done!



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's great as it is. Well done!



CONCLUSION:
You have a great writing style and sense of passion and I enjoyed reading your romance gone wrong fiery poem. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your time, heart, spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler








A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" 



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .