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Review #4739534
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Musings... Open in new Window. [18+]
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         Review for entry/chapter: "Beauty" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hello, Gaby!

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I am trying to do a review every day and squeak in with 12 anniversary reviews this month too. Because you were kind enough to volunteer to cheer for my beloved Habit Heroes, I have been visiting your port the most. *Smile* *Hug1**Smile**Hug2* Thank you for being wonderful you! *Heart* I hope you enjoy this celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.




INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
*Bulletg* I enjoyed this lovely, poetic celebration of womanhood of yours in this "beauty" poem of your musings folder. *Smile* Well done! *Clap*

*Bulletg* You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Well done! *Clap*



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

*Bulleto* I loved the themes of the four stanzas and how you arranged them (delicate, calm, strong, powerful). A lot of people falsely think our more delicate physiology makes us weaker mentally but that is not true. Well done! *Clap*


*Bulleto* I wondered if you were describing a particular lady or women in general? The poem works well either way. I think most women possess these characteristics. *Smile* Well done! *Clap*

*Bulleto* My favorite stanza was the last one, because it was powerful (*Smile*) and a great summary and conclusion to your beauty poem. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulleto* I didn't notice any spelling mistakes in your beauty poem. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulleto* Your beauty poem was interesting to me, felt like it was authentic, and made me want to read your next one. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulleto* If you wanted to enter this in a contest, I would recommend Rachel's "Shadows and Light" contest. I suspect it would do well.



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's lovely just as it is. Well done! *Clap*


CONCLUSION:
*Bulletv* You have a great writing style and sense of humor and I enjoy reading your musings and other writings. Well done! *Clap*

*Bulletv* Thank you for sharing your time, community spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler






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