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 Eyes of Mist Open in new Window. [13+]
Ayala never had any doubts that the Shakaree were evil. But then she met one of them.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Ooh I thought this was a story of two characters but really it is the story of three. I can't wait to read more of the writer's story. To me it seems like these chapters are getting shorter but so much more is happening in them than the earlier ones. I do wonder about the world outside. How the war is going. I also have begun to question who the real villains behind the war are. I don't think her people are as innocent as she and the writer seems to think that they are. The doors open for him not for her.
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