Amputated? Whoa man. He seems a lot different he really has begun to care about her. too bad this adventure has cost her her arm. What possessed her to leap to his defense?

It is good to know that the writer can affect the situation, but it sucks he does such a puss poor job of it. What I want to know is which faction this city belongs to.

The writing is smooth and well paced this story is far more compelling than I expected it to be from the summary. Something needs to be done with that to improve the likelihood people will move on to reading this it really is worth it