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 Eyes of Mist Open in new Window. [13+]
Ayala never had any doubts that the Shakaree were evil. But then she met one of them.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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This is getting really good. I love the two characters one on each side of the conflict. I question where this man built cave came from. And why it chooses that moment to collapse on these two characters in particular. I wonder if the rank of the Prince will offer him any more credibility than the average soldier when he encounters the world changing knowledge I sense he and the girl are about to encounter together. He is just peculiar enough an example of his people that I believe he might be able to absorbed it.
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