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 A Lost Escape Open in new Window. [E]
A simple poem about how places in our youth no longer bring us the same joy they once did.
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Review of A Lost Escape  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This is a bit of a bittersweet poem. There are places that once filled us with joy - playgrounds, restaurants, even stores - places we'd go to all the time. However, as time passes, things change. Places close, or are torn down. Sometimes there's something different there. All these things are a part of change. Change can be hard, but, sometimes, change is good.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read. Makes one think of their childhood.

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I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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