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Greetings and welcome to writing.com!

I'm glad to see a newbie entering a contest; I often encourage people to enter them around here to gain feedback and recognition. It's especially easy if you happen to be a poet, because you don't necessarily have to write for specific prompts.

This is an excellent personal story of your dream, written with a sense of realism and eeriness and ending mysteriously as we ponder the significance of the unavoidable flames.

I don't have much to offer in the way of criticism when it comes to personal narratives; your grammar is good, and you've met the rules for entry into the contest. Aside from that, your story is your own to tell as you like.

I can't tell what font size you've used here because I'm on mobile right now, but I always recommend Size 4 Verdana font to ensure readability across devices.

Also, you may want to add a third relevant genre to it. That makes your items easier to find when browsing, and also adds more opportunities for Quill Awards.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *Smile* *Fire*


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