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 Lost Umbrella Open in new Window. [E]
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Well, this is a cute story. You have a woman with a favorite yellow umbrella. One day though, the umbrella gets misplaced. She tries to look for it all along her route, but can't seem to find it. Will she be able to reunite with her mission prized possession? Only time will tell.

Characters
The characters look interesting. A very cute story for sure.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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