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The Kiss Open in new Window. [18+]
An edited story of the best kiss I ever witnessed. For Sensual MomentsRound 22
by Joey says" Happy 2025 Author Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Whoa steamy. THat is quite the story. I am impressed with the setup being so nonchalant about the guests though I think the two of them being thick as thieves kind of foreshadowed the kiss. THe description of the kiss is definitely arousing. This revealed a passion and I am impressed that there wasn't any jealousy. and I am glad you didn't sink to the low spot of suggesting a threesome. though from how you ended it it sounds like your love life from that point on was an intellectual threesome. All you're missing is the PHYSICAL presence.
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