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Review #4738437
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Slipping into Madness Open in new Window. [18+]
Another journey in Wonderland
by Rhyssa Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "A-2: Mirror Writing" Open in new Window.
Review by Choconut Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi Rhyssa Author Icon,

I am reviewing your Mirror Poem, "A-2: Mirror Writing" Open in new Window., in. affiliation with "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Open in new Window.. My review is part of "Wonderland" Open in new Window..

Please remember, these are purely my own opinions, and any advice given is done so with the sole intention of being helpful.

I read this poem and had to send you a review. I did this task yesterday, and my poem pales in comparison with yours. You clearly got the form and the theme. It works both as a mirror poem, but also as a poem without the reflection.

The way you describe the topsy turvy-ness of Looking Glass World through every verse, through every line, is pure genius. I had a big smile on my face as I read. Literally, the whole way through. I laughed out loud.

I think the biggest laugh came from this line: "I brushed my feet and shoed my head." I love that. Oh, and when I came to, "Every bite that I took filled my plate front to back," the gluttonous part of me badly wanted to go to Looking Glass World.

Your imagination shines through in this piece. It is so creative, and it embodies everything that is Looking Glass World. I think it is exactly what Kiya was looking for when she set this task.

Honestly, I'm envious. I wish I could have created something like this. But, it wasn't to be. Your poem, though, is wonderful. I really enjoyed it.

Choconut

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