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In The Jurisdiction of You and I (Poem)  [E]
A short poem, about crossing intentions and breaking the narrative.
by K. Marie Martin
Review by Past Member 'ashok25'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It's such poetry that tells us about crossing intentions and breaking the narrative. We, the teller and he meet at that time when the season demands that. Everything is going okay until a dirty deal comes from his side which is full of greediness. But, the teller was not so weak. She doesn't accept that dirty contract.
Her mind was strong and honest. She can think positively. That inspires us to follow the same.
It's an excellent beginning. A bright future is waiting for you. So, utilize the opportunity.
Write on!

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