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Review #4738297
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Slipping into Madness Open in new Window. [18+]
Another journey in Wonderland
by Rhyssa Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "I1:The Jury" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Greetings!

I'll be transparent up front: I'm only taking the time to stop by other people's Wonderland stories because it's required for continuing *Laugh*

But since I'm here, I'll do my best. I went straight to see who you picked for jury duty, and oh boy, what a fine selection. The characters are quite realistic, serious and relatable, and I could easily see it as a rundown for a sort of Twelve Angry Men type of legal drama. You've labored over the details of their lives in an admirable way that I doubt anyone else did.

I would suggest using size 4 Verdana font to ensure readability across devices, and to bold, underline and number each name so it looks tidier and not like an interminable laundry list. It looks like a lot more than 1000 words, but you kept within the limit.

Keep on going Through the Looking Glass! I'm cheering for you *Delight* This is a big project, and you've come far along in it.

Thanks for sharing, take care and have fun *Smile* *HeartT*


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