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 A Lost Escape  [E]
A simple poem about how places in our youth no longer bring us the same joy they once did.
by MCrewDude
Review of A Lost Escape  
Review by Past Member 'ashok25'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It's a simple-looking rhyming poetry that tells the real truth of every life. It is a piece of advice from an experienced person to the teens.
The tendency of our teens to flow the times away idly. But, an experienced person knows the value of time. Once it passes away, that time will never return. So, try to grab all the little little happiness that time gives you. If you let them go, they will never come back. You have no way other than to regret it in the future.
Today you are young, you have enough strength to fight against tougher situations. But, that stamina will be lesser with your age. Your heart will be stronger than it was in the past, but your physical ability does not permit you to do the same. It's a painful situation, but the situation is out of your control. So, real wisdom is not to go away every happy moment. It is an advice, especially to the teens.
The poet gives these tips from his personal experiences to intimate the proper direction of life. From my experiences, I also admit those.
It's a brilliant poem.
Write on!



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