This is getting more interesting. Drew and Valerie went to bed right away because Valerie was tired and she slept for a couple hours. Then they had lunch. Valerie taught him how to play with a record player and then chess. First I think they went grocery shopping and Drew helped her grandfather with the ladder. It started raining so she made him promise to wait until tomorrow. Dinner time came and they ate. Night time and they headed back to Valerie's house. Only bullies from highschool came around to disturb the peace. Just when they were about to attack Drew fought them off.

Great details. Bullying didn't stop. But maybe her and her grandparents are safe. No spelling or grammar errors found. Good job and keep up the good work!

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