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It's a suspenseful short story that has only one character. He is none other than the teller of the story. It is very mysterious. We also can find the flavour of a horror story, too. So it becomes scary.
The teller enters a hotel. But surprisingly, there is not a single person in the desk reception or anywhere. Only an unending silence is there. So, from the beginning, the writer can create enormous suspense.
After a lot of turmoil, the teller can finally reach the allotted room. The room number is 314.
But, after entering the room, he does not get any sort of relief. The situation becomes more scary.
The narrator begins to see some strange sights. Sometimes, he hears some sounds that hammer in his heart and with the growing fear, he starts panicking. He decides to leave that mysterious hotel. But he finds that someone has locked the room from the outside very tightly. Will the teller survive or not? This is the key question. It is a fast-paced story and ends very quickly. That forces me to read it again.
Very compact style of writing.
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