Wonderland [13+] a "nonsensical" writing activity. Shssh! Activity in Session! |
Personal Note: I came to visit you this fine Friday {or whatever day or evening it is} evening. You have a wonderful place here at Writing Dot Com. I loved coming to see all the things that you have in here. I am sure that I will be coming by some other time for another visit with you. I chose to review: Wonderland. My Greeting: Hello, I hope everything is going well with you. I thought I would come by and give you a little visit and give you a review. Enjoy! I know that I will enjoy my visit with you and I will more likely be back another time or two! My Disclaimer: Please keep in mind that all I can do is give my thoughts, my opinions, my suggestions, and how it makes me feel. Feel free to take what you can benefit from and discard anything else. My goal here is to be encouraging, uplifting, and helpful. My Thoughts: I love the setup and the breakdown of each section. It's very organized and well thought out. My Favorite Parts: I love it from the very beginning to the very end. And I love the images are in here too. It all goes so well together. My Editing Comments: I did not see anything that needed any, kind of correction/editing at all. Great Job! My Suggestions: Continue being creative and doing all, the wonderful things that you do. keep sharing and weaving your web of words, and most of all keep writing, no matter what. My Rating: I am, giving a rating on your very creative place here I have reviewed with a "five-star" rating.
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