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Review of Apple Jacks  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Well, this is a cute poem. A woman likes to eat Apple Jacks because they remind her of her childhood. Sometimes it's the simplest of things that give us the most pleasure. It could be just enjoying a favorite treat, or watching the clouds, or rolling some dice. It can be the little things that make life worthwhile.

Characters and Thoughts
It's kind of cute in the ways one thinks of their childhood.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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