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Fugitive Open in new Window. [E]
A lady with curious hat is rescued from pursuers.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, sir,

A nifty story you have here. You've taken all elements of the prompt image and carefully incorporated them into the tale, from the two shadowy figures to the weather and the lady's blue eyes.

I like how you've added the little details about going to Africa; knowing some of your background from your blog, I know it's personally true and adds a touch of realism (as if that's really you it happened to.)

The plot you've come up with is creative; to me it looks like the lady is walking her robotic owl down the street. I didn't feel like creating a cliche "damsel in distress" scenario, as I have an instinctive tendency towards, and eventually I stalled on this round and qualified for Jody's Contest Challenge by writing some limericks. I may yet enter it, if I can ever escape Wonderland *Laugh*

Can't think of anything to suggest here; it has a beginning, middle and end, goals, stakes and obstacles, and characters. Grammar is perfect.

Take care, thanks for sharing, good luck on the contest, and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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