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 The Gift Open in new Window. [E]
A mysterious gift by an unlikely delivery agent
by Jtpete 1986 Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A cute story about a woman who notices something odd in her garden - a scarecrow, which shouldn't be in that spot - especially since she didn't have a scarecrow. An attempt to investigate also turns up odd, as by the time she's ready to head out, the scarecrow has vanished, leaving something behind. Makes one wonder what it means.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
Don't know if it's simply a misspelling, or a change of tenses, but you have a mix of Past and Present tense words, like has when had might make more sense in the area where she finds, and cleans the ring.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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