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Hello Jill Congratulations on your Writing.com account anniversary this month! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion, courtesy of the "Anniversary Reviews" activity. Positives The emotion and personal experience in this piece shine through, loud and clear. I really like that you went into specific detail on a number of the ornaments and their history; it painted a lovely picture of a Christmas tree full of unique memory-sparking ornaments, rather than a tree full of identical, mass produced decorations that one would buy at a store. You definitely did a great job of creating a cozy feeling of being at home during the holidays, reminiscing about all the history that's on display in front of your tree. Suggestions No specific suggestions for improvement. Overall Overall, I thought this was a delightful read and really captures the essence of the holiday season and the memories a Christmas tree can hold after a lifetime of collecting unique ornaments. Nice work! I hope you've found this review helpful. If so, please consider paying it forward by reviewing the work of another WDC author! Respectfully, Jeff "Rating & Reviewing Philosophy" My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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