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Given: Mar 12, 2024 at 7:41pm
Length: 1,266 Characters |
1,076 w/o WritingML
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THE POEM
A poem about light, the power of it's reflection, and that special something that hovers just above the light.
WHAT I LIKED
I enjoyed the word play; it deepened the expression of the poem and made me think of different angles of interpretation.
STRUCTURE
This is a cinquain poem. This a 5 line stanza poem. The lines are 2, 4. 6, 8 and 2 syllables.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling mistakes. The poem is easy to read.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "light is dancing" -- light is electric, vibrant, and alive. Light gives life.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
I loved the flow of the poem and the invitation to give light your own interpretation. Was it a lover basking in the light of lovemaking or simply the early morning twilight breaking out the positivity in one's soul? I enjoyed this poem very much!
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