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| (5.0)  My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEMThis poem deal with nature, specifically spring.  WHAT I LIKEDI enjoyed the visual and how it put me in the moment.  STRUCTUREThis is a haiku. A haiku is a short form of Japanese poetry, traditionally with 3 lines, and a 5,7,5 syllable pattern. The poem here matches traditional form. MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling mistakes. The poem is easy to read. DESCRIPTIONSI liked: "A cardinal pair" - It was descriptive enough to picture two red birds on an early spring tree branch with green buds just popping out. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSThe haiku also had a challenge - not to use the letter "E." Very good job writing a visual without that letter! The haiku did a great job capturing the following elements; simplicity, directness of expression and intensity. Well done!    HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM"Anniversary Reviews"  
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You responded to this review 03/13/2024 @ 3:42pm EDT