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Please remember these opinions are purely my own, and any advice given is with the sole intention of being helpful.


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What I liked: I chose to review this piece because I am a self-confessed chocoholic. And I'm trying to make healthy food choices, which tends not to include chocolate. Which I find really sad. But I am so happy I found this item in your portfolio because it's given me some wonderful ideas for different creations I can try. I have a question: When you say cacao, is that the same as cocoa powder? Or is it a more stripped back version?

I've put chocolate in my chilli before, and that was delicious. But, I guess, the healthy was to do that is to use cacao. I'm definitely up for trying that. Also, I love the sound of the vegetable desserts. Black bean brownies sound good. And healthy, too.

My favourite of all the the desserts you describe is the mousse that is made from the thick part of coconut milk, maple syrup and cacao. My mouth is watering just thinking about that. Chocolate zucchini loaf is something I could eat right now.

I have another question: You mention coconut sugar, which is something I've never heard of before. I'm not sure we sell it over here. Would an alternative sweetener work?



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Suggestions: One thing I kind of struggled with is the font. I think you have bolded the whole text, and because it is in italics, it makes it a bit hard to read for people with sight problems. I mean, yes, I could make the page bigger, but my eyes aren't all that bad, and it looked like a big blur at first. Also, a minor thing ... In the paragraph that begins, "Because I love my chocolate ..." you have either not left a paragraph space, or you've spaced down when you didn't mean to.


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Parting Comments: I am so happy I found this piece of yours. As soon as I saw the title, I knew I had to read it. And it did not disappoint. There is some great advice and some delicious-sounding recipes and food ideas. I must add cacao to my shopping list this week. Thank you.

Happy anniversary!


Choconut

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