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 Spooky Mission Open in new Window. [13+]
Andrew embarks on a mission to a spooky place. Will he succeed or fail is to be witnessed.
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Review of Spooky Mission  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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A man comes to investigate a house that has a mystery, with the help of his manservant. When the servant ends up dead, the man realizes that there's a killer in the area. He soon encounters a woman, who is more than she seems. Will he survive the night? Only time will tell.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
The spelling and grammar look fine. However, that are some spots where the period from one sentence could use a space from the first letter of the next sentence.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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